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©2007-2009 ~Raikun
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Here's a snapshot of what I hope is an upcomming comic strip from me. The strip won't be drawn out but will be using cutouts from IMVU.com and is based on a bunch of preliminary sketches. I thought that one of the sketches would particularly cool in high def (in most of them it's just basic lines, and everyone has a bad case of camel chin) so I spent a little extra time on it (three hours).

The story.
There are eight "Sentinel Souls" charged with keeping the planet in order, however they're devided as to how an upcomming purge will be used to cleanse the planet. Four of the Sentinels want to whipe humanity away using the purge, and the other four are trying to hold the purge back to save humanity.
Caroline, the butterfly, suffered a traumatic past and sides with the "anti-human" side while Starleta, the lady panther, believes that humanity can be taught and she'll fight to the death for them.
Caroline or "Caro"s identity has remained a secret up untill now and both of them fight it out at a club they frequent. In the last panel we see Caro's human friend Izzy shocked and appaled at the fact that her raving-comrad was going to whipe out her kind, and torn between hating her and feeling for her pain.

CRITIQUE!
I want lots on the characters, I basically slapped the background in there, nothing too serious I just wanted to take in white space.
I put alot of thought into the figures, how they moved, I even consulted a few manga and riot photos and I really want to focus on them before I go working on the background.

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:iconlupinia:
Lady, you did some awesome work here! I so wish I could draw like this. ~sighs~ The form of Starleta is wonderful. The turn of the torso and the raised leg for the kick is level and shows the movement well. Bravo! As for Crao, her foot in the first frame, facing the viewer, should be bigger as it is closer. Does that make sence? Again, well done!

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:iconraikun:
Thank youuuuu, and you can draw like that :P
I'll work on the foot tonight, and may rescan on moan-day. Thanks again!

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:iconoyr2up:
nice kick!

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:iconraikun:
Whhyyyy thank you :3
~steals your hamburger~ Mmmm nummy

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Who needs drugs when there's insomnia?
:iconoyr2up:
:rofl: :spam: there's a spam...you just need your own bread!

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:jedi:Make your today better than yesterday...
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:damphyr:I'm a rookie pixel artist...hope you'll like my art...
:icondoughnut-tengu:
Oh nice, i like the character designs. a comic done from imvu shots sounds like a cool idea.

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:iconraikun:
We're looking for extras :D
Thank you very much ^_^

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